Wednesday, 20 November 2013

Real and fake love

An opinion is that their love is fake. Its fake because true love is not commiting suicide to show your love for your partner, its the small stuff that count. Many relationships end in tragedys because people want to show their love in the most stupidest ways ever. If it was real love they would want to do more with their life.

First of all their are many opinions on love. Many people have the love at first sight feeling because of physical atributes. Girls love guys who dress nice have beautiful eyes and nice deep voice. For guys they mostly pay attention to a females body and  her face. Researchers say that people can tell if they see the "One" person who truly belongs in their life in less then three minutes. Quote from romeo and juliet act 1 scene 5 page 2 "O, she doth teach the torches to burn bright!
It seems she hangs upon the cheek of night
Like a rich jewel in an Ethiope’s ear;
Beauty too rich for use, for earth too dear!
So shows a snowy dove trooping with crows,
As yonder lady o’er her fellows shows.
The measure done, I’ll watch her place of stand,
And, touching hers, make blessed my rude hand.
Did my heart love till now? forswear it, sight!
For I ne’er saw true beauty till this night."
Wich is him saying he feels like she is the odd one out in the world and she is now bassicly his everything and he hasnt even talked to her or has never met her.

Second thing is trying to specificly define love. In many peoples mind they have thoughts like "ohh love is sex and gifts". For someone else it could be cuddling next to the fire place and telling each other love storys. So really their is no definition for love because of diversity of peoples feelings and thoughts.

Third thing is that when you do fall you cant call it true love because their relationship has many more years to come and tragedys they will face that will most likely ruin thier relationship. In romeo and juliet thier is a scene were romeo talks about how fate ruined their relationship and now they cant be together anymore cause destiny didnt want them together.

Not finished Still in progress.

6 comments:

  1. there are some spelling mistakes

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  2. Good start, I agree with Himmat. Now just add the conclusion.

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  3. you have a few spelling mistakes try to fix those, overall you put up a good argument but try to explain your thoughts better. Remember to add more quotes! -Mellisa & Kajol

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  4. Good start remember it's a 5 paragraph essay

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  5. On top of the things the others have written you need to look into finding evidence for your claims about what guys and girls are looking for. Then look up a few definitions of love instead of just saying there are lots. :) Keep working at it. Proper spelling makes it easier to read and support for your point makes your argument more powerful.

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